Review: Will You Dance, Miss Laurence? by Raven McAllan

Will You Dance, Miss Laurence? by Raven McAllan
Series: Dance Studio (# 1)
Release Date: March 15, 2013
Publisher: Evernight Publishing
Pages: 34
Source: Book provided by publisher for review
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Dancing lessons were supposed to be fun, but who ever heard of attending them without your knickers on?

Shibari Master Ryan is intrigued by Ava, so when his cousin asks a favor, he is only too happy to help Ava out of the rut she says she is in.

Will her past allow her to enjoy his bondage, or will true submission prove a step too much?

 

Review:  Ava Laurence needs to spice up her life, so she signs up for dancing lessons after a suggestion from a friend. Little does she know that the type of dancing Ryan Culliver has in mind isn’t exactly ballroom dancing.

Author Raven McAllan introduces readers to a short story that tests a woman’s limits in Will You Dance, Miss Laurence? This BDSM-themed short is better suited as an appetizer, although I would definitely have liked to have read more about Master Ryan.

If you are looking for some hot action with a large dose of kink, then this will be a great way to spend an hour. Some of the language was a bit clunky to my American English ears, particularly the reference to knickers. I also found a few spots where the story needed some polish to improve the flow.

I’m not a big fan of quickie reads because I like to spend time getting to know the characters. In this case, I felt like I got a tantalizing glimpse…but it was a bit too short to savor.

 

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